Storms of Flour
True appreciation of everything another is is always rooted in everyday reality. That includes the depths of sensual love.
Today there was mention of flour flying (you know who you are), and it drew me to memory of a favorite poem--and a favorite image. The image in Neruda's sonnet is made sweeter by drawing in thoughts of domesticity. (It was written to his wife, Matilde Urrutia).
The wonder of love is that we ordinary mortals touch the universe through one another.
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Sonnet XII
Full woman, fleshly apple, hot moon,
thick smell of seaweed, crushed mud and light,
what obscure brilliance opens between your columns?
What ancient night does a man touch with his senses?
Loving is a journey with water and with stars,
with smothered air and abrupt storms of flour:
loving is a clash of lightning-bolts
and two bodies defeated by a single drop of honey.
Kiss by kiss I move across your small infinity,
your borders, your rivers, your tiny villages,
and the genital fire transformed into delight
runs through the narrow pathways of the blood
until it plunges down, like a dark carnation,
until it is and is no more than a flash in the night.
Pablo Neruda
3 Comments:
Hey Dale, good morning.
Down in the tropics it is still pretty early but as it is Sunday and one of my few precious days off, I am blogging around to see what's new.
I like your sonnet here!!! So earthy and full of fire. I haven't seen a sonnet since high school when we were forced to read 'em daily for our English lit teacher, Ms. Zuniga. A very proper and precise lady :)
Have a great Sunday Dale and will keep checking in here often.
Hi Dale.
Incredible Sonnet. Just incredible.
This may seem like a strange comparison ... but it made me want to pull out my old Rod McKuen poems ('Listen to the Warm', 'Stanyan Street & Other Sorrows', Etc.) ... and remember those days. Thanks for bringing up those thoughts. : )
Thinking you probably will not see this post until January. (ha ha)
Regards,
Brenda
P.S. I saw Rod McKuen one time. Long, long time ago. He sat on a little stool, on a huge, expansive stage. Alone. And recited his poems. And you almost felt like you were there with him in his experiences. Almost.
hi dale, your comments on brenda's blog got me curious so here i am. what an absolute beautiful sonnet. i don't even have words to describe it other than absolutely beautiful. i think it's amazing what the heartfelt depth of our souls produce. only a true poet knows.
sylvia
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